diff --git a/changelog.d/847-cyclone-shared-selection.md b/changelog.d/847-cyclone-shared-selection.md
index 24edf2ebb..150295823 100644
--- a/changelog.d/847-cyclone-shared-selection.md
+++ b/changelog.d/847-cyclone-shared-selection.md
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
-- Explicit cyclone selections publish only the currently selected NHC/CPHC
-  storm into shared context. Switching storms removes the previous identity
-  without a false eviction event. Deliberate clears remain distinct from feed
-  disappearance (kvnloo, #847; reviewed by quanticsoul4772).
+- Let the voice assistant read the storm you select in Cyclone advisories:
+  its official advisory, position, intensity and movement. Clearing the
+  selection and the storm leaving the feed are reported apart (kvnloo, #847).
diff --git a/docs/CURRENT-STATE.md b/docs/CURRENT-STATE.md
index 6df75c27e..f3b3d3396 100644
--- a/docs/CURRENT-STATE.md
+++ b/docs/CURRENT-STATE.md
@@ -742,13 +742,12 @@ geographic seams and releases on disable; forecast animation is not implied.
 NHC movement speed is converted from miles per hour to rounded knots by the
 proxy; advisory wind intensity is already in knots and is passed through.
 Cyclone markers, labels, tracks and cones are hidden beyond the horizon on every map source.
-Explicit cyclone selections publish one shared `weather-cyclones` record
-with official advisory provenance, source position, the English classification
-name and, while the proxy serves its cache, the cache fetch time. Switching
-storms selects the replacement before pruning the old record; automatic row
-selection never claims global context, and refreshes do not re-announce
-selection. Deliberate clear/disable reports `deliberate`; losing the selected
-storm from the feed reports `evicted` and assigns no fallback.
+Explicitly selecting a storm publishes one shared `weather-cyclones` record:
+advisory provenance, source position, the English classification name and,
+while the proxy serves its cache, the cache fetch time. The automatic row
+selection does not claim shared context; refreshes do not re-announce it.
+Clear or disable reports `deliberate`; a storm leaving the feed reports
+`evicted`, with no fallback.
 Consult the linked official advisory for safety decisions.
 
 Voice and HUD snapshots reuse the existing feedState classifier. Analyst follow-ups retain their original data provenance; current-view results append provenance without replacing legacy fields. HUD context and deterministic telemetry include non-nominal feed state.
diff --git a/src/app/layers/cyclones.js b/src/app/layers/cyclones.js
index d671a11eb..bed75c76e 100644
--- a/src/app/layers/cyclones.js
+++ b/src/app/layers/cyclones.js
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 import { createCyclonesLayer } from '../../layers/cyclones/index.js';
 import * as context from '../../data/contextStore.js';
 
-/** Wire cyclone selection into the application shared-context owner. */
+/** Wire cyclone selection to the application shared context. */
 export function createApplicationCyclones(options) {
   const browserContext = typeof window !== 'undefined' ? { context } : {};
   return createCyclonesLayer({
diff --git a/src/layers/cyclones/index.js b/src/layers/cyclones/index.js
index 8741ad8a3..95655d5d0 100644
--- a/src/layers/cyclones/index.js
+++ b/src/layers/cyclones/index.js
@@ -116,14 +116,12 @@ export function createCyclonesLayer({
       layerId: 'weather-cyclones',
       layerName: 'Cyclone advisories',
       source: 'NOAA NHC / CPHC',
-      // Keep official storm names verbatim; layerName identifies the layer.
       label: storm.name,
       latitude: storm.position.latitude,
       longitude: storm.position.longitude,
       // At most 12 properties reach the voice summary; keep the list short.
       properties: {
         classification: storm.classification,
-        // English source meaning; unknown codes stay unexpanded.
         classificationName: Object.hasOwn(
           CLASSIFICATION_NAMES,
           storm.classification,
@@ -140,7 +138,7 @@ export function createCyclonesLayer({
         movementDirectionDegrees: storm.movement?.directionDegrees,
         movementSpeedKt: storm.movement?.speedKt,
         advisoryUrl: storm.advisoryUrl,
-        // Present only while the server serves its cache with NHC unreachable.
+        // Only while the proxy serves its cache because NHC is unreachable.
         staleCacheFetchedAt:
           snapshot.stale && Number.isFinite(snapshot.fetchedAt)
             ? new Date(snapshot.fetchedAt).toISOString()
diff --git a/src/layers/cyclones/index.test.mjs b/src/layers/cyclones/index.test.mjs
index a3e40fc95..41ecaf3d1 100644
--- a/src/layers/cyclones/index.test.mjs
+++ b/src/layers/cyclones/index.test.mjs
@@ -405,8 +405,7 @@ function harness(
     },
   };
 }
-// Runs a test body against the real shared-context store on a stand-in window,
-// with the voice runner reading the same store.
+// Real shared-context store on a stand-in window; the voice runner reads it.
 async function withSharedContext(t, body) {
   const previousWindow = Object.getOwnPropertyDescriptor(globalThis, 'window');
   const host = new EventTarget();
@@ -657,8 +656,7 @@ test('cyclone clears leave another layer selection and its records alone', async
     assert.equal(store.selectedEntityId, 'flight:abc123');
     assert.equal(events.length, before);
 
-    // A foreign record removed without clearing its selection: a cyclone
-    // feed failure must not report that selection as evicted by cyclones.
+    // A cyclone feed failure does not evict a dangling foreign selection.
     store.entities.delete('flight:abc123');
     let fail = false;
     const other = open({